The Logos of Erato
When tyrants bloom among the dung of the city
first they strike against me and my roses
that I offer to the city freely, without demands
save that the thorns are observed and prepared for.
But the grey and wise scream against my thorns
for they shall rend the fragile hands of children
The scent is too strong, they warn, and it will lead astray
those that should revel in the smell of civilization.
But even hidden beneath layers of cloth, the scent calls
to the most pure part of that which is human
the desire to be desired. Even in their greatest cheers
their greatest honors, do the great wish nothing but love.
And if they cannot have your love by the wooing
your wandering eye will be cursed and derided.
For in their capacity, they see only the one path
that must be selected and followed to the forsaking of others.
Pay no attention, cry the tyrants, to the shades of hue
for all shall be red, the purest and most natural of color.
I laugh, for my bouquet is made of flowers shorn
from all manner of flourishing, pinpricks expected and welcome.
Ceremony and rigid gardens are the sole domain of the Rose,
they claim further, when their first complaint was easily met.
Again I laugh, for Roses existed far before gardens,
And their flowers were not bound to pots of gold and silver.
And again they scream at the thorns, no longer for the children
but for themselves. Now their hands hurt, and work is required
to experience that joy of perfection which exists within
their perfect idealized garden, which they refuse to build.
Oh let your love be as they are, not as you wish to prune
Accept their flaws, for addressing them the stems adjust
seeking the sun in new ways and surprising with twists
thought unimaginable before the impediment arose.
The fruit with dents and pocks is still sweet on the tongue,
should you put aside your judgement to taste the heart,
The worm often hides unseen within a perfect specimen,
an entry made long ago, waiting to burst upon the tongue,
should one become too intimate with the product.
Even here on the field of Troy, lovers secretly steal
glances to each other, knowing their tastes, and wishing
that happier times would result in friendlier contests.
Comments
Yes, Erato is talking about sex.
She's also talking about politics and war as well. (And a bit of a dig at certain people in my age group who are FAR too bitter too early.)
Thanks to Erato for the inspiration, because she really delivered some beautiful images.
I do not pretend I know what I do not know.
Thanks, detroit. "It must have been the roses", heh.
That, in its essence, is fascism--ownership of government by an individual, by a group, or by any other controlling private power. -- Franklin D. Roosevelt --
It's a very common metaphor...
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I do not pretend I know what I do not know.
Another piece to ponder, thank you detroit; i think you should
share your work with the folks in Ashland:
Amrita Ramanan, Director of Literary Development and Dramaturgy is potentially a good person to begin a conversation with.
Cheers again for these lovely reads and hard work; have a good one.
I would adore to work with some of the folks...
I will definitely look into the contact you suggest. I honestly just want to get this in front of as many people as would benefit from it.
I do not pretend I know what I do not know.
I like your garden imagery...
The hedge roses with vicious thorns do have the sweetest scent, and lumpy heirloom tomatoes the most sublime flavor. It is the sort of metaphor that leads you down all sorts of proliferating paths.
I have been doing battle with invasive bittersweet which threatens to strangle and smother the other plants, trying to remove the still-green berries before their beautiful orange and red ripeness entices the birds to spread them farther.
I do find it interesting, and thanks for the feedback!
I actually love that little green space and wish that the next neighbor over wasn't so fond of open bonfires. The day may come when I am glad indeed for the neighbor's huge apple trees and blackberry bushes.
I do not pretend I know what I do not know.
hot air
The way c99 broke your posting, the next line after these was the title of the next older Essay.
"Hot Air".
It caused me a good laugh!
"US govt/military = bad. Russian govt/military = bad. Any politician wanting power = bad. Anyone wielding power = bad." --Shahryar
"All power corrupts absolutely!" -- thanatokephaloides
Coincidences abound when you start invoking the Muses...
Thanks for the chuckle though, because I would totally have missed that.
I do not pretend I know what I do not know.