The Logos of Demeter
The deepest shadow passes before the heart
upon looking up from your labors to find
that the visage of your child is no longer
to be found within your sight
Every crack and fallen feature is to be searched
Every riverbank, every tree, for children do love
to play at games of hiding, and delight in the relief
that comes to the face of a parent upon their return.
And yet the game continued as the night grew long
my calls of home and rest not answered,
The only response that of one who would waste away
rather than speak truth and reveal my child.
So I searched. Across the vast world while man
railed as to my impiety, and to my shirking of duty.
But there is no higher duty to be performed
No fields to be overseen and no law to uphold
And yet when my child returned to me
the world had made marks
upon her face, upon her innocence.
And I found less joy in the tasks which before had been all.
I know my search meant little here
Where far greater import to the mind of man lives
than that of a small mother, and a smaller daughter.
But it is my daughter that ends your fighting.
Indeed for her insight was greater than mine
for I intended to drag my brother by his ear
and apply such remedies as I had in our youth
to his impertinent and rash position.
But she implored upon me to allow her to stay
for love had grown, and she had even chosen
to eat willingly of the fruits that dwelled
Within the place that I found abhorrent.
She found a role within, one that brings a glimmer
of light to those within a place where none return
And she returns to me, remaining within my sphere
A great diplomat. One who goes to Hades, and enjoys the trip.
As I rest, so too does the soil,
Time to contemplate, and to remember
better times and worse,
but always the cycle continues.
With each planting the roads grow easier,
for they become well worn grooves,
my daughter bringing stones to pave the steps
and assemble the pillars that mark the path.
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Ok, this one hurt to write a bit.
Because there's a great deal of my memories of losing my own kids here.
Thanks for Demeter for letting me have a little insight into how she felt, and a lot of thanks to the Muses for letting her speak.
I do not pretend I know what I do not know.
a cyclic tale on many levels
Persephone, Demeter and Hecate are sometimes considered the original triple goddess, as it can be soundly argued they are the maiden, the mother and the crone aspect of the same Great Goddess.
https://etheria888.wordpress.com/2010/03/03/chapter-four-persephonedemet...
Congrats on another well done piece.
“Until justice rolls down like water and righteousness like a mighty stream.”
It's an interesting interpretation.
But Thalia's little jest did not seem appropriate.
As for right now, I'm leaning towards Hestia as the third member of the triad. (And I've decided I MUST add Persephone because of the fact she's been mentioned TWICE now, and it's not nice to talk about somebody as if they aren't there.)
I don't know if Hecate will show up, because honestly I don't feel much of a connection to her. Perhaps that will change as the play continues, but I don't know.
As research goes on I'm finding that there's many interpretations and that I consider my own personal insights from the gods and muses to be the one that I want to tell.![Smile](https://caucus99percent.com/sites/all/modules/smiley/packs/kolobok/smile.gif)
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I do not pretend I know what I do not know.
AAAAAAND, just doing a little preliminary reading...
Yep, she'll be showing up, and a few others who have no business being there, but whatever! come one come all, just please don't overtax the Muses!
I do not pretend I know what I do not know.
Thanks, detroit
That, in its essence, is fascism--ownership of government by an individual, by a group, or by any other controlling private power. -- Franklin D. Roosevelt --
Thanks for reading!
I do not pretend I know what I do not know.
this speaks to my kids
thanks again!
Marilyn
"Make dirt, not war." eyo
There's an absolute dread...
I do not pretend I know what I do not know.